tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1486748024840744191.post788582041570440420..comments2023-03-26T21:54:39.694+13:00Comments on Haylee's Cool Blog!!: Hayleehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03175204515732334742noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1486748024840744191.post-90982860793940005402009-10-12T14:28:09.465+13:002009-10-12T14:28:09.465+13:00hay haylee
i really liked the way you had heaps o...hay haylee<br /><br />i really liked the way you had heaps of pictures!!!<br />the next steps for improvements are having more info<br />but apart from thhat it was fab!!!<br />-imoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1486748024840744191.post-46942912534383293072009-10-12T14:28:01.166+13:002009-10-12T14:28:01.166+13:00wow haylee,
I liked it how you used a good clear ...wow haylee, <br />I liked it how you used a good clear voice and used pictuers to show what you are talking about.Next time you could slow down when you are talking.Emmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01203482072551074319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1486748024840744191.post-31252168514997945892009-10-12T14:26:27.253+13:002009-10-12T14:26:27.253+13:00Wow, your movie is AWESOME.
I really liked how you...Wow, your movie is AWESOME.<br />I really liked how you had pictures to show what you were talking about and your voice was really clear.Next time you could not talk so fast because it was hard to understand.Monikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901328451978661443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1486748024840744191.post-124148427594684672009-10-12T14:26:08.851+13:002009-10-12T14:26:08.851+13:00Hi Haylee,
I really liked how you had heaps of pi...Hi Haylee,<br /><br />I really liked how you had heaps of pictures with words that discribed the picture. Also it was very clear and I learnt heaps!<br /><br />Next time you could try turn the music down in some of the parts!<br /><br />-MadiMadihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03089975743564582619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1486748024840744191.post-32079287307976594842009-10-12T14:25:46.750+13:002009-10-12T14:25:46.750+13:00well done to have an music that matches your backg...well done to have an music that matches your background. Please keep your music sound quieter and not to mspeck fast. I like your pictures. well done haylee!Cindyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13940336424981003308noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1486748024840744191.post-2377646816219447712009-10-12T14:24:39.940+13:002009-10-12T14:24:39.940+13:00WOW Haylee!!!!!!!!!!
I relly like how you tould yo...WOW Haylee!!!!!!!!!!<br />I relly like how you tould your auddience all the information you found out.<br /><br />I think you could inprove the slownes of your voice.Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11756129201274948497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1486748024840744191.post-1722111471248354542009-10-12T14:24:16.459+13:002009-10-12T14:24:16.459+13:00Hi Haylee and Simone
I Loved your movie
I Liked ho...Hi Haylee and Simone<br />I Loved your movie<br />I Liked how you made it focued and you used photos and labels and how you started it with grace being all funny.<br />Next time you could try to make it slower so that we can understand and get more info.<br />MariaMariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07390575086638800018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1486748024840744191.post-90624215796701389092009-10-12T14:23:59.285+13:002009-10-12T14:23:59.285+13:00Hi Haylee
I really like the way you made your movi...Hi Haylee<br />I really like the way you made your movie clear and made it creative by having lots of different locations around the school to make it more effective. Next time then maybe you should try to slow down a bit while your speaking. AWESOME!!!HOLLYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09541246916633244842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1486748024840744191.post-67463459522071815582009-10-12T14:23:28.722+13:002009-10-12T14:23:28.722+13:00WOW Haylee,
I really enjoyed how you gave lots of...WOW Haylee,<br /><br />I really enjoyed how you gave lots of pictures throughout it.<br /><br />Next time maby you could use louder voices and slow down a bit.OLIVIAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13968844628236993792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1486748024840744191.post-38332186370671398332009-09-24T11:57:43.574+12:002009-09-24T11:57:43.574+12:00wow haylee
i really liked how used different mus...wow haylee <br /><br />i really liked how used different music and how it fitted in with the movie.Simonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17288268248868824391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1486748024840744191.post-58058365970945473192009-09-23T10:38:13.810+12:002009-09-23T10:38:13.810+12:00WoW that is an AWESOME, effictive movie that you a...WoW that is an AWESOME, effictive movie that you and Simone made Haylee. I liked how you Clearly displayed the information that you found out and most of all I liked how you kept me entertained with all of the different settings! Something that you could work on to improve your movie would be to mabye try to have both of you at the same time in it more often because with just one person it is a bit more boring but but overall yuor movie is AWESOME!:)Demihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06987121596616040006noreply@blogger.com